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i feel lost in a world so big
surronded by hate and sorrow
a world full of nothing but evil
a world with no peace

i wonder what will happen
when we are all gone
will it start a new peace
or will it break like all our hearts

this is a place of pain
a place of war and death
there is nothing in these towns
nothing but regret and broken hearts

my final wish shall never be heard
my last words will never be remembered
my heart will be left shattered
my tears will be never ending

but i wish good fortune on this world
for i hope that it will only get better in time
for this is what i have wanted my whole life
a world filled with peace and love

a world filled with joy and laughter
a place filled with love and beating hearts
so i will stay in this cold world and hope for the best
cause that is my last and final wish in this place of pain
this is what i think of this world and i hope that it will get better instead of always getting worse that is my last and final wish~
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demonrobber Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Maybe this is our playground. The place where we discover wisdom through our mistakes. It may take time but perhaps we will find peace in heaven. Our time on earth is just a stepping stone. There is definitely too much pain and sorrow. It would be good if we could have peace on earth. We need dreamers in this world to give us hope and to inspire us. Words of wisdom. I hope your wish comes true. Nicely done.
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EnthusiasticArtist Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Writer
you are so selfliess of all the things youcould have thought of you thought of others.
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pangirlbrit Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I really hope this world gets better too. I hope it becomes more friendly and accepting, I really hope the economy will start looking up to.
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Prewz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
The world will only get better if A.) Humans go extinct, or B.) Humans stop being such douchebags. And neither of those are gonna happen anytime soon. (Or maybe, never)
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KiwiNyx Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD well said my friend well said
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